up draft meaning in Chinese

上升流
上升气流
上向通风

Second version : submit two copies with cover letter as well as the marked - up draft ( with my comments )
第二次版本：缴交两份连同封面页以及批改过的稿子（有我的评语的）。
As bush addressed the un general assembly on tuesday , a marked - up draft of his speech popped up on the un web site , complete with a phonetic pronunciation guide to get him past troublesome names of countries and world leaders
本周二，布什在联合国联大上发言时，一份带有很多标记的发言草稿突然出现在联合国的官方网站上，发言稿的很多地方都注明了发音，以防止布什读错一些拗口的国家名和国家元首的名字。